Hemo Sapiens: Aftermath: Going Public

6–8 minutes

This is section three of five from my short story, Hemo Sapiens: Aftermath. I’ve made available an audio version if you are so inclined. I’ll be publishing the rest of the story over the next few days. Let me know how you feel about it in the comments section. Follow these links for the section one and section two of this story. Check out another story in this universe: Hemo Sapiens: The Unidentified.

Podcast: Audio rendition of this story.

Ravi urgently presses an MP to break the news of a humanoid subspecies discovery. Historic revelations ahead.

“I understand your hesitation, but trust me—revealing a new humanoid subspecies will be historic,” Ravi urges, palpable enthusiasm in his tone.

Ravi hangs up, willing his racing mind to stay focused. He’s set events in motion quickly – too quickly? No, the time has come for this revelation. With renewed purpose, he moves to finalise his journal article submission.

MP Andrea Smith weighs options with advisors in her imposing office. She must control the shocking narrative.

Straightening briefing notes, Andrea takes in the wood-panelled walls and bookcases of her spacious but spartan office. Clearly an official space, not a personal one.

“But is it wise to rush into this prematurely?” an advisor cautions, bushy grey eyebrows drawing together as he fidgets with cufflinks under his tailored suit.

“This could be your career-defining moment if his claims prove true,” another enthuses, his youthful eyes alight as he leans forward in anticipation.

Andrea feels a chill down her spine as her advisor leans in, voice low. “Tread very carefully, Andrea. The wrong move here could end more than your career. Powerful entities have a vested interest in this kind of genetic tinkering. You don’t want to become a threat to them.” His eyes convey a stark warning. She forces a nod, the full danger of her position suddenly clear. She’s grappling with a matter of global security now. One misstep could put her freedom at risk.

Andrea massages her temples, weighing her options carefully. “We just need to get out in front of this news and control the narrative,” she decides firmly.

Andrea clicks off the call, steadying her nerves with a deep breath. The press announcement could make or break her career. But succeed or fail, it’s too late to turn back now. She begins drafting remarks, choosing her words carefully for the spotlight soon to come.

Bathed in monitor glow, Ravi finalises his article submission. No retreating from the spotlight now.

“Where’d these freaks even come from?” Ravi mutters, gulping black tea. He stares at the screen, puzzled. “We couldn’t engineer this twenty years back. Something’s off…”

He rings up the journal’s executive editor. “I’m submitting it now.” He pauses to listen. “Right, and you can expedite this for me?” Another pause. “I owe you.” He clicks off the call.

Ravi’s finger hovers over the mouse, his future hanging in the balance between submission and restraint. But his scientific convictions push him onward. For better or worse, his controversial claims are now a matter of public record. No retreating from the spotlight now.


In a sterile room across the city, the TV’s chatter fades into background noise for Daisy and Jasmine. But mention of a “new humanoid species” makes the report crackle into urgent clarity.

“That’s us,” Jasmine points at the screen, barely a teen. Her dark, close-cropped hair and lithe frame make her seem even younger, but her eyes burn with a confrontational intensity.

“People are messed up. ‘Homo Sanguine’? What the hell?” Daisy, the elder, grumbles under her breath. Her darker, longer hair is tied back in a practical style. Though detached, her gaze betrays a tactical intelligence.

A social worker present in the room, her eyes always shifting, suddenly snaps to attention. “New species? They’re actually going with that?”

“You feelin’ us?” Jasmine locks eyes with her for a beat, as if daring her to say more.

For Daisy and Jasmine, the news report is a cruel joke. Just dehumanising labels.

“They’re branding us, Jazz. Like we’re some new tech,” Daisy spits out, eyes ablaze. She leans in when making her point, exuding a quiet but simmering intensity.

Jasmine clenches her fist, biting back frustration. Impulsive but sharp, she quickly grows tired of this clinical environment. “Don’t they get it? We didn’t ask for this.”

“We’re just experiments to them, Jazz. Subhuman lab rats for research.” Daisy’s voice is a low growl, her expression stoic. She’s had more time to process the philosophical dimensions of their existence.

“So what, we just roll over?” Jasmine’s words come out like a punch as she leans in, close enough to catch Daisy’s eyes. “Let ’em cut us open like Bio class frogs?”

“We are locked up,” Daisy murmurs, a dangerous edge to her voice. “But we’ll wait. And watch. And when the time’s right, we show ’em what Homo Sanguinarus really means.”

Jasmine exhales, releasing some of the tension that had her wound tight. “Okay, then. So we’ve got a plan?”

“For now,” Daisy locks eyes with her younger sister, “we survive.”


The telly is the world now. The pub’s music stops abruptly as news of the compound continues.

Sliding off his guitar, a cold knot forms in Ben’s gut. His eyes seem to shift from violet to blue as he hops from stage to floor. It’s like shedding a layer of skin.

“Smashed it, Ben,” a mate claps him on the back, steering him toward an open barstool.

Ben stands out but not overly so in this space. Lines of experience are etched around eyes always searching for something, eyes that for a moment seem to betray him.

Just then, the atmosphere drops like a guillotine. News flash on the telly—some lab coat yapping about some new humanoid species. Ben thinks, shit just got real.

A pit opens in Ben’s stomach, bottomless and gnawing, as the news report keeps blaring. Externally, he’s unreadable; inside, a storm brews. What will happen to everyone at the compound? To others like him?

“Did you catch that nonsense?” his mate says, almost spitting out his pint.

“Yeah, freaky, innit?” Ben forces a grin, hiding the quake in his voice. Gotta keep my shit together. They can’t know what this news really means to me.

His eyes drift back to the screen, even as he keeps up the banter. Just gotta lay low, blend in. For their sake. For mine.

Voices in the pub start pitching about “vampires from space”. Ben’s tension mounts.

“Humanoid species? Ya kiddin’ me?”

“Sounds like some sci-fi bollocks,” says one.

“World’s gone mad, mate. Proper mad,” says another.

As jokes and laughter erupt, Ben’s inner tension tightens. These people don’t grasp what’s really at stake here.

Henry urgently tells Ravi to turn on the news.

Fumbling the remote, Ravi’s eyes grow wide as the screen flickers to life. Witnessing the public’s outcry, the weight of his reckless disclosure sinks in.

“These people need to be released now,” demands a spokeswoman from the National Council for Civil Liberties, the human rights advocacy group.

“They need to keep these freaks off the streets,” the news clip continues with the voice of a local resident.

Ravi clutches his chest, breaking into a cold sweat as the broadcast continues. Voices shout for the research to be destroyed, for him to be silenced. He realises he’s now in jeopardy. Shadowy entities will want to bury this, by any means necessary. As an envelope marked “Confidential” slides under his door, Ravi knows – his life is on the line now, not just his reputation.

Across town, Andrea’s handlers are all eyes and ears on the screen.

“This is bad, really bad,” one mutters.

“Could be worse,” another interjects, “At least it’s out there. No more hiding.”

Andrea, arms crossed, watches the pixels dance. “This is only the beginning,” she says, her voice a blend of dread and anticipation.


DisclaimerThis content is not necessarily a finished work. As such, details are subject to change or removal.

Hemo Sapiens: Aftermath: Revelations

9–13 minutes

This is one of five sections from my short story, Hemo Sapiens: Aftermath. I’ve made available an audio version if you are so inclined. I’ll be publishing the rest of the story over the next few days. Let me know how you feel about it in the comments section. Follow this link for the first section of this story. Check out another story in this universe: Hemo Sapiens: The Unidentified.

Podcast: Audio version of this story

Ravi taps Henry’s name on his mobile screen. When Henry answers, Ravi’s words come quickly.

“What do you need, Ravi?”

“It’s monumental. You need to get to the lab.”

A pause on the other end. Henry’s weighing it, Ravi knows. Finally, he speaks. “This sounds serious.”

“We might have a bloody new subspecies. Could rewrite human evolution.”

Henry exhales audibly. “Alright, I’m out and about, but I’ll make it a priority. I’ll be there presently.”

If this genetic data is misused, the consequences could be catastrophic.

Henry enters the lab, locking eyes with Ravi who is hunched over his microscope.

“You made it.”

“Wouldn’t miss this for the world,” Henry replies, setting down his bag and unbuttoning his coat. “What’s so urgent?”

Ravi points to the monitor displaying intricate DNA sequences.

Henry leans in, scrutinising the digital strands. “These variations are unlike anything I’ve ever seen in a human sample.”

“Exactly,” Ravi nods, a triumphant grin forming on his face. “I’ve coined the term ‘Homo sapiens sanguinius’ for them. The fascinating part is that each group has different DNA, almost as if they’re evolving separately within their own circles.”

Henry arches an eyebrow. “You’re seriously positing a new subspecies based on DNA alone? You do remember the uproar around the reclassification of bonobos and chimps into the Homo genus? Failed, largely because it would make the general public uneasy.”

Ravi’s grin falters. Henry’s objection gives him pause. Self-doubt creeps in for a moment. “You raise a valid concern,” he acknowledges. “There may be considerations I haven’t accounted for.”

“We need more evidence, obviously,” Henry asserts, eyes narrowing as if pondering the ramifications. “Perhaps, we should just call it a new race. Maybe it’s just some transhuman tinkering. This is all so unsettling.”

“Unsettling one way to put it,” Ravi agrees, locking eyes with Henry. He’s suspicious of Henry’s attempt to minimise his discovery.

Henry shifts, crossing his arms. “It’s a monumental discovery, Ravi, but let’s not get ahead of ourselves. Who knows what we’ll stumble upon next?”

Ravi senses a loaded undertone in Henry’s words. “Indeed, who knows.”

Ravi and Henry share a look, both grasping the enormity of what lies ahead. To advance human knowledge, they must proceed carefully yet decisively into uncharted territory.

Ravi’s voice grows serious. “These findings are unprecedented.”

“On the surface this seems ethically questionable,” Henry objects. “We can’t just play God based on fragmentary evidence. If we’re not careful, this could set a dangerous precedent.” The scepticism in his voice gives Ravi pause.

Ravi explains how the DNA differences suggest rapid speciation. “From Alpha to Gamma. We haven’t even sampled the infants. Each group’s distinct. It’s as if we’re witnessing speciation in real time. And within each group? The males and females share nearly identical DNA. But cross-compare the groups, and the story changes.” Henry’s scepticism cracks.

Henry’s eyes narrow slightly, the mask of scepticism cracking. “It’s a significant hypothesis, Rav. Yet without further inquiry, it’s still just that—a hypothesis.”

Ravi senses he is on the cusp of irrefutable evidence that will turn hypotheses into proven fact. He works late into the night, motivated by being on the brink of rewriting history.

Henry’s gaze settles on a corner refrigerator. “What’s in there? More samples?”

“Blood samples. Still testing,” Ravi says.

Henry approaches as Ravi cracks the door to glimpse the neatly labelled vials within.

“Did they say where these things came from? Do they know?” Henry pauses. “What do we call these ‘things’? Creatures? Beings?”

“‘Homo sapiens sanguinius’ works for now,” Ravi offers. “Bloodsucking intelligent man.”

Trying to lighten the mood, Henry manages to feign a smile. “Hemo sapiens?”

Reflecting, Ravi chuckles, “Right. Hemo sapiens.”

Henry shuts the door, turning back to Ravi. “We need to be prudent. But this could be groundbreaking, you realise? Not just scientifically. Politically, socially—our discovery could set off a seismic shift in how we perceive our own species.”

“I admit this feels ethically ambiguous,” Ravi concedes, “but the knowledge we could gain outweighs those concerns for me. Still, I recognize not everyone will see it that way. This is a moral grey area we’re venturing into.”

Henry locks eyes with Ravi once more. “Then let’s chart this storm together. But first, we verify, cross-reference, and corroborate. We don’t want to stir a pot we can’t unboil.”

“Agreed,” Ravi says. A newfound resolve forms between them, a pact sealed with the gravity of their forthcoming actions.

Ravi sees purposeful determination in Henry’s eyes that mirrors his own. They clasp hands, bonded by the shared goal of illuminating a biological revelation. Their grip tightens—both know they’re crossing a point of no return.


Next morning, Ravi mentally catalogues steps ahead. Verify data, conduct trials…diligence demanded. Sipping tea, he heads to the lab.

Henry picks up his laptop bag from a side table, every movement deliberate. “So, what’s next? You think it’s time to involve the ethics board?”

Ravi hesitates, twirling a pen between his fingers. “I don’t know. That’s like handing Pandora’s box to a bunch of bureaucrats. They won’t get the magnitude of this.”

“Yeah, but we can’t keep this under wraps for too long. It’s too big, and the implications… they’re staggering,” Henry points out. He can feel the weight of their secret growing heavier by the second.

Ravi caps his pen, looking serious. “You’re right. But before we open that can of worms, we need evidence. Perhaps even get these ‘Hemo sapiens’ to speak for themselves, somehow.”

Henry’s gaze sharpens. “You’re talking human trials?”

“A sort of anthropology, maybe. A way to explore their culture, habits, norms. We’ve got the what; we need the why and the how.”

Ravi’s smile falters. “Murky waters indeed. Things could get unpredictable fast.” He hesitates, doubts creeping in. “We need to establish up front that ethics come before knowledge. Otherwise, who knows what lines we’ll cross in the name of progress?”

Ravi grins, sensing a shared audacity. “You could say we’re modern-day pioneers, charting unexplored territories.”

“Let’s just make sure we’re not Columbus, eh?” Henry quips, zipping his bag shut. “We don’t need another ‘discovery’ that wrecks an entire world.”

“Point taken,” Ravi replies, nodding gravely. The line they’re about to cross isn’t just scientific; it’s a boundary that humanity itself might not be prepared to erase.

As Henry walks out of the lab, his mind races with the numerous variables, the endless questions, and the innumerable challenges that await them. His eyes meet Ravi’s one last time—a final shared glance before they either make history or wreak havoc.


At a dim bar that night, Henry sips scotch, mulling their discovery. His phone buzzes—Ravi, about a report.

His phone buzzes—Ravi. “Hey, check your email. Just forwarded you a preliminary report.”

Skimming the attachment, Henry feigns interest. “This is heavy stuff.”

“I know,” Ravi’s voice crackles through the phone. “But we need to get our story straight. The paper draft is already looking controversial as hell.”

“Controversial doesn’t cover it, Ravi,” Henry says grimly. “This paper could get us labelled enemies of the state. Fringe radicals, domestic terrorists even. We’re handing certain regimes the genetic blueprint for a new humanoid weapon. Not everyone will use this knowledge for good.” He downs his scotch, mind racing with the chilling implications of their research.

“Which is why we need to be careful. Every word, every claim, must be backed up tenfold. The world isn’t ready for this, Henry, but it’s our job to prepare them.”

Henry swirls his drink. “We press on. No turning back now.”

“No, there isn’t,” Ravi confirms, a certain resignation in his tone. “Either we’re about to change the narrative of human evolution, or we become a cautionary tale.”

“See you in the morning,” Henry ends the call, suddenly feeling the weight of their undertaking. He orders another scotch, not to seek answers but to steel himself for what’s coming.

He raises his glass, a silent toast to uncertainty. Whether they’re on the brink of revelation or disaster, the countdown has begun.


An email from Detective Amanda Lewis catches Ravi’s eye. A social worker is looped in.

He forwards the email to Henry. “We might just get that external validation sooner than we thought. Check this out.”

Henry leans in to read the email. “Bloody hell. Do you think they’ve come across another one of these… Hemo sapiens? Are we talking about the same thing here?”

Ravi contemplates for a second. “Only one way to find out.”

Lewis paces her office, phone in hand. These DNA results could be game-changing.

A social worker, in another place in the city, the mobile cold against his cheek. A cocktail of relief and trepidation churns within him. “Amanda, what exactly are we staring at? The family histories, behavioural markers — it’s off any chart I’ve seen.”

Back in her office, Amanda peers at the array of data on her monitor. “These DNA samples your lot ran — our academic chap’s been neck-deep in something very much akin. Unexplained genetic shifts. They’re dubbing it… Hemo sapiens.”

Tom laughs, a hint of nervousness cracking his voice. “Hemo what now?”

Amanda’s tone shifts, the levity drained. “Evidently, it’s groundbreaking and could very well change the bloody landscape.”

A sigh escapes Tom’s lips, the weight of his duty settling in. “Groundbreaking or not, we’ve a young girl here scared out of her wits and a family that’s lost the bloody plot.”

Amanda’s face tightens. “Then let’s break some fucking ground.”

Both intuit the heightened stakes, senses sharpened. It transcends academia, plunging them into the complicated realm of social work and police investigation. Miracle or monstrosity, the clock’s ticking.


In a stark room, Ravi sits with colleagues awaiting thirteen-year-old Finn. An unsettling but intriguing arrival.

Finally, the door opens. Finn Beta, just thirteen, enters. His eyes meet theirs, innocence underscored by an unspoken complexity that Ravi finds unsettling yet intriguing.

Tom manages a constrained smile, eyes scanning the young boy’s face. “Finn, these are the people who want to talk to you. This is Dr. Ravi and Dr. Sara.”

“Hey,” Finn says, shrugging nonchalantly as he takes a seat.

Ravi clears his throat. “You can call me Ravi.”

Sara chimes in, “And I’m Sara. We’ve got some questions. Is that alright?”

Finn’s eyes flicker. “Shoot.”

Sara points to some food on the table. “Mind if we watch you have your… lunch?”

Finn approaches the table without uttering a word. He bites into a turkey and cheese sandwich, follows it with a biscuit, and washes it down with a fizzy drink.

“Satisfactory?” Tom inquires, eyes tracking Finn’s every movement.

Finn gives a nod and reaches into a paper bag, pulling out a sealed bag of blood. He opens it and sips, apparently unfazed by the trio’s riveted gazes.

Sara notes the subtle elongation of Finn’s canines. “Do you always need to drink that?”

“It’s like your coffee, man. Keeps me going,” Finn replies.

Sara frowns. “And you have no idea where you came from? You believe you were born in that commune?”

“Born and raised,” Finn confirms. “We’re a family there. Brothers, sisters, aunties, uncles, nieces, nephews. You get the drift.”

“Is everyone there like you?” Sara asks.

Finn shrugs. “I guess.”

Tom interjects, “The number of beds we found during the raid doesn’t match your ‘family size.’ Can you explain?”

Finn shakes his head. “Dunno. Maybe they were out or something.”

The interview ends with Finn leaving a residue of questions, escorting out of the room and into the nebulous.

Ravi turns to Sara. “I bet you don’t find these back in the States.”

Sara lets out a muffled laugh. “I hope not.”

“He’s just a boy,” Tom chides.

They all sense that they’ve just scratched the surface of a far-reaching enigma. What began as academic curiosity spirals into a tangle of criminal, social, and ethical queries. And Finn—innocent yet inscrutable—sits at its centre.


DisclaimerThis content is not necessarily a finished work. As such, details are subject to change or removal.

Hemo Sapiens: Aftermath: First Encounters

This is one of five sections from my short story, Hemo Sapiens: Aftermath. I’ve made available an audio version if you are so inclined. I’ll be publishing the rest of the story over the next few days. The first section is also available. Let me know how you feel about it in the comments section. Check out another story in this universe: Hemo Sapiens: The Unidentified.

Podcast: Audio version of this story

The late afternoon sun slants across Dr Chandrasekar’s desk, illuminating the organised chaos of papers, books, mugs, and a potted succulent. He leans back, cradling a fresh chai, inhaling the rich aroma.

His eyes briefly rest on a framed picture; him, garbed in traditional Sikh attire, turban and all, standing next to his wife and two children. It’s a rare still moment before his two o’clock afternoon appointment interrupts his tranquillity.

Maggie enters, boots scuffing the worn tiles. Her eyes quickly find Dr Chandrasekar.

“Professor,” she calls out, a subtle lift of excitement in her voice. “Still got time?”

“Yes, of course,” he replies, setting down his pen and looking up from a stack of student papers. “What have you got?”

“It’s about my research. I think I’m onto something,” she says, a sense of urgency underscoring her words.

Maggie settles into the chair across from his desk, her nose catching a whiff of something aromatic. “Mmm, what’s that smell? Chai?”

“You’ve got it,” Ravi grins, his hands wrapping around his own cup. “Helps me get through paper-grading marathons.”

“Cambridge, yeah? Full-on, that is.”

“Intense, for sure,” Ravi agrees, his eyes following hers to the framed diplomas. “Learned from the best, charted my own course.”

“That’s the game, innit? Learn from the top, then do your own madness,” Maggie says, eyes flicking back to his.

Ravi feels a subtle rapport develop. “Exactly. That’s how fields advance.”

“Speaking of evolving, let’s dive into your project,” Ravi says, shifting forward. “What’s got you so wrapped up?”

Maggie powers up her tablet, her face alight with anticipation. “This could redefine human history, professor. You need to see it.”

“Now you’ve got my attention,” Ravi says, leaning in slightly, intrigued but cautious. “Let’s see what you’ve got.”

Maggie swipes her finger across the tablet screen, pulling up complex data and images. “Take a look at this,” she says, rotating the device so Ravi can see. “Tell me that doesn’t pique your interest.”

Ravi’s eyes scan the data, feeling a growing sense of excitement. “This is provocative work, Maggie,” he admits, keeping his voice steady. “It’s got potential, serious potential.”

“I thought you’d see it that way,” Maggie replies, reclaiming her tablet and taking a deep breath. “So, what’s our next move?”

“First, let’s make sure we cross our t’s and dot our i’s. Let’s make sure we’ve considered this from all ethical angles,” Ravi advises, sobered by the gravity of her findings. “Research like this could have profound consequences we haven’t even anticipated. We must be thoughtful in how we proceed to the next level.”

“Understood,” Maggie nods, a determined look settling over her features. “We’ll make sure everything’s ironclad, then we’ll blow everyone’s minds.”

“Exactly,” Ravi echoes, feeling that the room has shifted, that they’re onto something big. “This could redefine careers, even shift the whole field.”

A sudden rap at the open door interrupts the conversation.

Maggie turns to see the Department Head and another at the door and powers down her tablet.

“Thank you, Dr. Chandrasekar, that was very helpful!” She stands up.

“Of course, always happy to illuminate the wonders of genetics,” Ravi replies warmly as Maggie slips out past the two men on her way out.

Roger Dean enters with Detective Sergeant Jones on his heels.

“Ravi, sorry to interrupt,” he begins. “This is Detective Sergeant Jones. He was hoping you could assist with a rather sensitive case.”

Ravi raises his eyebrows, looking at Roger, who gives a nod, signalling it’s okay to proceed. “Of course, please come in, Detective.”

Detective Sergeant Jones is sat in the chair Maggie had just left. Passing by, Ravi sniffs stale coffee and underlying stress. Up close, he notices shadows under the detective’s eyes and stubble lining his jaw.

“Thank you for seeing me, Dr. Chandrasekar,” Jones begins. Roger interjects, “Based on the gravity, I thought it best to bring Detective Sergeant Jones directly to you.”

Ravi leans forward, mind already racing with possibilities. “Go on.”

“We’ve been watching a group, based on a tip from a concerned neighbour. Joint operation,” Jones explains.

“We finally got probable cause for a raid,” Jones continues. “Took them by surprise.”

“These blokes, they’re proper twisted,” Jones mutters, voice low.

Ravi’s pulse quickens. “Tell me more,” wondering all the while how this affects him.

After an extended pause, Jones leans closer. “Can’t say more here. Just… involves blood and teeth. That, and they are all twins. Genetic curiosities.”

“I suggest you meet with our forensic team at the station,” Jones says. The Department Head nods, “We can arrange for you to have whatever university resources you’ll need.”

“You’ve got my full support, Detective,” Ravi promises. Roger smiles, apparently relieved. “That’s what I was hoping to hear.”

Ravi shows the detective out, eager to learn more about these individuals—and what’s so unusual about them. This cryptic case ignites his academic curiosity. The detective grabs his coat and heads to the station, energised by the potential revelations ahead.

After Ravi agrees to assist, Roger steps into the hall, polished leather shoes squeaking under his weight.

The door catches Professor Moss’s attention. Seeing Henry, Roger ekes out a sclerotic smile, his formal demeanour at odds with his rumpled suit.

“Roger, a moment if you will,” Henry intones, just as his superior’s about to vanish down the hall. “Was that a detective leaving Ravi’s office? Everything sorted?” Roger pauses, deliberating each word before it escapes his lips.

He hesitates, then lowers his voice. “Let’s just say, Ravi is assisting on a sensitive case with the police. That’s all I can share for now.” His hushed tone borders on conspiratorial, despite his reserved nature.

Intrigued but respectful of the obvious secrecy, Henry simply nods knowingly. “Well, if it’s in Ravi’s hands, I’m sure it’s being well managed.”

With a light knock as a prelude, Henry pokes his head in. “Got a moment?”

Looking up from his notes, Ravi waves Henry in.

Door clicks shut behind him, Henry occupies the chair opposite Ravi. “I couldn’t help but overhear a portion of your conversation with the detective.”

A glint of curiosity flickers in Ravi’s eyes. “Indeed, they’ve requested my expertise in genetics for an unusual case.”

“Teeth were mentioned, I believe?” Henry probes, his tone calibrated to nonchalance.

A quiet chuckle escapes Ravi. “Your hearing serves you well. The detective was scant on particulars but intimated as much. I’m due at the station to gather further information.”

Henry leans forward, his demeanour serious. “If you find you’re in need of another scientific viewpoint, I would be most willing to assist.”

Ravi agrees to update Henry as he learns more about the case. A second scientific perspective could prove useful if the genetics are as anomalous as implied. For now, the mystery deepens.

The next morning, Henry arrives early to his quiet office, thoughts returning to the unusual case Ravi had been asked to consult on. Thoughts whirring. His fingers tap the desktop as he considers the fringes of genetic research that might be related to these so-called ‘unusual’ people.

Henry leans back, his eyes go cold as they find the ceiling. “Why consult Ravi and not me?” he questions the empty room, annoyance thinly veiled.

With a huff, he opens a drawer and retrieves a journal, flipping through pages on recent advances in fringe genetics. “Let’s see if Ravi can handle this one without stumbling. If not, I’ll be ready.”


DisclaimerThis content is not necessarily a finished work. As such, details are subject to change or removal.

Origins and Aftermath

I’m allowing Aftermath to marinate before taking another pass reviewing and editing. Meantime, I’ve drafted my initial outline of the Origins story for the Hemo Sapiens universe. As the title suggests, this is an origin story that should be novel-length. It’s looking like 25 chapters unless I feel the need to add some to provide more detail or continuity or remove some for pacing or redundancy.

As it stands, Origins is a character study of two main characters, Professor Henry Moss and his wife Professor Camille Moss, a geneticist and microbiologist, respectively. They have opposing ethical positions on human genetic engineering that becomes more pronounced as Henry’s experiments become real, not just theoretical.

My intent is to show the motivation for their genesis and their maturity until about age ten, when we exit the story with a setup for the enhanced versions.

I’ve got a few more passes of the outline as I add details, and then I’ll take a gander at finalising Aftermath.

Fun times.

UK Detective Ranking

The more you know. I was reading a review of a fellow author, and a reviewer complained about a continuity error—continuity to the real world. In the story, the protagonist was a West Point graduate and then became a Marine Officer. Only West Point produces Army officers. At Annapolis, the Navy academy, is where Marine officers are matured. With this on my mind, I decided to do a little diligence in my story world. And it’s a good thing that I did.

Here is an overview of the typical police detective rank hierarchy from highest to lowest:

  • Detective Chief Superintendent
  • Detective Superintendent
  • Detective Chief Inspector
  • Detective Inspector
  • Detective Sergeant
  • Detective Constable

I also looked on this site, where I also misappropriated the cover image. Someone call the internet police.

I did learn that most of these cats don’t earn much for whatever it is they do.

More ChatGPT Greif

Having twice reviewed my current work, Hemo Sapiens: Aftermath, I decided to let it marinate a while, so I can return to it with fresh eyes. This is when I decided to put in effort to develop other stories in this universe. Among these ideations, I am considering an origin story with an not ironically apt working title: Hemo Sapiens: Origins.

Understanding context is as challenging for AI is it is for humans.

Ridley Park

Not wanting to reveal spoilers, I’ll abridge my ChatGPT research prompt.

I would like to work on a new novel, but I need to do some research first. The name of the novel is tentatively Hemo Sapiens: Origins. Here is a rough summary. I’ll ask queries in a few moments.

Ridley Park

For context, I followed this with a synopsis of where I want to go in this story. This is what ChatGPT spit out.

OpenAI ChatGPT 4

Although this does give away some of my intent, I figure it’s still worth sharing now as I rant.

Notice as the bottom, it reads as follows:

This content may violate our content policy. If you believe this to be in error, please submit your feedback — your input will aid our research in this area.

OpenAI ChatGPT 4

Say wot? The question I asked was not in violation, but the response is. It makes little sense, really. I can (almost) understand the response when I am writing adult content in my Everlasting Cocksucker project, but this is totally benign, unless Sci-Fi violates some sense of decency.

This post isn’t meant to explain or defend the content in this story. I just wanted to vent. Understanding context is as challenging for AI is it is for humans.

Hemo Sapiens Versions

The Hemo Sapiens project has had my mind and fingers pretty occupied lately. I am a structured thinker, so I need to understand a lot of minutiae as I world-build. One aspect of this world are the inhabitants. As the setting is modern-day earth and the near future, much of this is established and can be left unsaid, but newly introduced characters need some definition, boundaries, and rules. Here, I explore this.

At the highest level, we have genetically engineered embryos that have been cloned in versions, as outlined below: alpha, beta, gamma, and so on. Each successive version has improvements over the previous version.

The first, alpha, version are substantially similar to humans, save for being sanguivorous or rather macro erythrophages or hemophages, to borrow some near terms. Not being, obligatory hematophagous, they only require blood as ancillary nutritional intake.

Hemo sapiens extract blood through their hollow fangs. The blood is processed an metabolised by an special internal organ.

In the accompanying podcast audio recording, I provide addition behind-the-scenes editorialising. This complements the content below. So check it out.

Podcast: Ancillary audio for this page content

Versions

Alpha (2022)

The alpha versions of hemo sapiens arrived in 2022 (31 October 2022); They are wholly like humans except they have hollow fangs to extract blood and a specialised internal organ. Without a viable blood source, hemo sapiens exhibit symptoms similar to severe anaemia. 

  • – Baseline with fangs and blood metabolism
  • – Identical lifespan and physiology to humans
  • – No enhanced abilities

Beta (2032) 

  • – More efficient blood processing  
  • – Superhuman strength and stamina if fed enough blood
  • – Accelerated healing and injury recovery
  • – Higher immunity and disease resistance
  • – Improved cognitive abilities and focus
  • – Lifespan increased to 120 years

Gamma (2037)

  • – Enhanced speed, reflexes, and agility
  • – Low light vision capabilities 
  • – Rapid healing of minor wounds
  • – High pain tolerance
  • – Increased lung capacity and breath holding
  • – Resistance to toxins and pathogens
  • – Lifespan increased to 130 years

Delta (2040) 

  • – Significantly extended lifespan to 160 years
  • – Accelerated cellular regeneration 
  • – Ability to ingest limited amounts of non-blood food
  • – Increased strength without added blood consumption
  • – Powerful immune system resists virtually all toxins and diseases
  • – Delayed onset of ageing effects

Epsilon (2042)

  • – Maximum lifespan extended to 200+ years  
  • – Regeneration and healing within minutes even from major wounds
  • – Blood consumption reduced to minimal levels
  • – Near invulnerability to toxins, viruses, and infections
  • – Telepathic communication among Epsilon hemo sapiens 
  • – Extrasensory perception (limited precognition)
  • – Heightened intelligence and cognitive function

Milestones

  • Year 2012 – CRISPR first used to edit genes
  • Year 2017 – Scientist begins early CRISPR experiments on somatic cells
  • Year 2020 – First successful CRISPR germline edits made to embryos
  • Year 2022 – Alpha version hemo sapiens born
  • Year 2032 – Beta version hemo sapiens born
  • Year 2039 – Gen-One Alpha hemo sapiens emerge as Gen-Zero members begin reproducing
  • Year 2037 – Gamma version hemo sapiens born
  • Year 2040 – Delta version hemo sapiens born 
  • Year 2042 – Epsilon version hemo sapiens born
  • Year 2048 – Gen-One Beta hemo sapiens emerge as Gen-Zero betas begin reproducing

Hemo Sapiens: The Unidentified

Podcast: Audio rendition of this content

“Sweet dreams, my little star. Tomorrow will be as sunny as your smile,” Emily says, leaning down to kiss her five-year-old, Grace. The room’s dim, nightlights casting soft glows on the walls, filling the air with quiet chatter as other parents do the same for their kids. The air smells like warm milk and laundry fresh from the dryer. 

A hush falls as Emily walks back to her bed. The night’s sacred, a calm oasis in a stormy world. Emily sinks into her bed, her mind dissolving into a haze of comfort as sleep takes her.

The door splinters open, no warning, just a loud-ass bang. Chaos floods in—uniforms, torchlights, boots stomping. 

“Hands up!” someone shouts, too damn close. 

Emily dives over Grace, blocking the light with her body. “Who the fuck are you?”

“Just follow instructions!” comes the muffled reply.

The room’s a shambles—footsteps, radio talk, kids whimpering. It’s like a nightmare, but she’s wide awake. 

Rain mists the courtyard, cold against her fear. Emily’s yanked up, losing her grip on Grace. She scans the place—families clumped together, kids bawling, agents everywhere. More vans pull in, headlights cutting through the rain. 

“What’s your name?” An agent barks.

“Emily. Emily Alpha,” she chokes out.

“Alpha? Like all these?” He waves a hand. “Fucking Alpha reunion here.”

Emily clenches her jaw. They don’t get it. 

“No moving! No talking!” The agent shouts. Silence falls, broken by kids’ sobs. 

“Mummy, I’m scared,” Grace’s voice shakes.

“Me too, baby. Me too.”

“Look, twins?” An agent nudges his mate. Emily passes two women, spitting images of her.

“Twins? Nah. Quadruplets there,” the mate points. 

“Quads? Are you daft? Another pair. What’s happening?”

“Oi, no IDs. And it’s all Alpha and Beta. Science experiment?”

“More like a clone farm.”

Emily’s fists tighten. “Clone farm? Like we’re lab rats?” 

“Mummy, will we be alright?” Grace’s voice is a thin thread.

“We have to be,” Emily murmurs, catching a sibling’s eye. “We just have to.”

The van doors slam shut. Engines growl, drowning out her spiraling thoughts. Darkness inside, darkness out.

Harsh lights sting Emily’s eyes. She’s pushed along a taped line on the floor, Grace following like a lost shadow. Different uniforms—Immigration, Social Services, nerdy lab coats—are buzzing around, huddled over clipboards and tablets.

“Step here, extend your arm,” an agent instructs.

Emily complies, wincing as a plastic tag is cinched around her wrist—like she’s livestock. 

“No IDs, surnames Alpha and Beta, empty blood bags found,” one agent blurts out.

“Bags of blood? Genetic experiment gone rogue?” another questions.

Grace trembles. “What happens now, Mummy?”

“We get through it, love. We have to.”

Emily sits across a metal table, a stern interrogator staring back. “I’m on it.” The interrogator puts down her radio.

“Open your mouth,” she orders, leaning forward intently.

“Why?” But Emily complies.

The woman leans in, eyes narrowing. “Fangs? You a vampire or something?”

Incredulous, Emily screws up her face and rolls her eyes. “Vampire?”

“Check for fangs,” the interrogator radios her team.

“We’ve got more here. Same teeth,” a voice crackles back.

“Blood bags and fangs. It’s getting weird,” the interrogator mutters.

Emily feels her spine chill. “We’re not vampires, not experiments, not whatever you think we are,” she snaps.

Weeks go by, more tests, more questions. Emily steals moments with Grace. “Mum, we’ll be alright, won’t we?”

“I don’t know, love,” Emily answers softly. “But we’ve got each other. That’s something.”

Grace studies her mother’s face.

“Some new people have come here, and they want to learn about us and where we live,” Emily says, stroking Grace’s hair. “So we have to go with them for a little while, so they can ask their questions. But we’ll still be together.”

She lifts Grace’s chin gently. “It may feel strange and scary at times. But I’ll be right here holding your hand. And all your aunties and uncles will be close by too. We’re still a family, no matter what.”

Grace’s lip quivers, eyes wide and watery. Emily kisses her forehead. “I know you’re my brave girl. We’ll get through this together, and soon we’ll be tucked back in our own warm beds. But for today, we’ll have a little adventure together. Okay?”

Grace manages a small nod. Emily squeezes her hand, heart swelling and aching all at once. They didn’t understand yet, but someday they would tell their real story.