I’ve spent the better part of today rewriting Everlasting Cocksucker to a first-person, limited, present point of view. My intent is to shut down the aperture of perspective for the reader and give the story a better sense of immediacy. I also want to introduce the protagonist and primary perspective as an unreliable narrator.

This change will likely force some rewrites to accommodate flows and revelation of details. Better sooner than later, I suppose.

Apart from this, I am still missing major connecting tissues to stich together my outline and story arc. And then there’s the matter of the ending…